Poem: A Walk To Remember

A lifetime ago

We have sworn to each other to
Always remember, the
Love that we shared
Keeping a piece of each other in our hearts

Together, we walked on lovely sand of beach
On a lovely Sunday evening

Remember you told me
Everything will be alright in the end?
My heart had ached
Everything in me wanted it to be true
Maybe it could be- forever me and you
But now the love is gone
Even our love wasn’t forever, all we have now is a walk to


7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. farha
    Oct 26, 2008 @ 00:22:19

    u buat sendiri ke?

  2. Ripsta
    Oct 26, 2008 @ 00:46:35

    who else.. hurm.. thank ya.. im lost now..

  3. farha
    Oct 26, 2008 @ 01:56:02

    allow some time for u to get grip of yourself
    u’ll be ok

  4. copy/paste
    Oct 26, 2008 @ 11:25:45

    hey man..
    nice poem..

    somehow i can feel that sense of lost and grieve inside you..
    is everythings cool?

  5. Ripsta
    Oct 28, 2008 @ 10:48:51

    thank man.. its been awhile i don’t do poem.. afraid that my poem don’t get the real point.. i believe every poem got story beneath every words.. feel it.. heee

  6. farha
    Oct 29, 2008 @ 07:56:25

    i can feel it too…


    minum nescafe di pagi hari
    mata mengantuk jadi celik
    (xde idea nk sambung :P)

  7. Your Reader
    Jan 28, 2009 @ 12:20:24

    Wow! Thank you!
    I always wanted to write in my blog something like that. Can I take part of your post to my site?
    Of course, I will add backlink?

    Sincerely, Timur Alhimenkov

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